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I liked it! the last one is particularly good! (in my very humble opinion)
congrats!
"Derek" <scefonas@hotmail.com> wrote in message news:<SAqEc.2208$7t3.604@attbi_s51>...
> XLIV.
>
> the barrier is the flaw
> a sigularity in an otherwise
> seemless chromascape
> an individual experience
> in an absolute commerciasphere
>
>
> XXIV.
>
> then as one there
> exists a composed time
> being strung out along
> lineside
> and multiplied
> collected then sealed within
> a stone jar
>
>
> XXXI.
>
> you yourself would
> educate birds
>
> paying tribute
> sending songs
> and children
> noblel born
>
> to carry whatever weapons
> they are given
>
> assigned a show of respect and a number
>
> and those that choose to sail
> are the happiest
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