| Re: is it ok profile? |
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| John of Aix (j.murphy@nospamlibertysurf.fr) |
2004/08/30 11:27 |
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From: "John of Aix" <j.murphy@nospamlibertysurf.fr>
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Subject: Re: is it ok profile?
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etina1@hotmail.com wrote:
> Hi
> I would appreciate any help with editing/rewite if needed some
> sections of my resume.
>
> My questions are these:
>
> 1) is "Profile" section language good? if not where do I need to
> improve?
See notes.
> 2) is "Teaching Area Of Interest" title good? how about this section,
> is the content good? do I need to do any change?
No, it seems OK apart from the note I've made.
> 3)"Teaching Experince" section is basically a table that contain all
> my previous expeirnce.. the table consists of columns.I am not sure
> about the columns titles (Year, Insititue, Course Taught). Do you
> think they are ok?
Be careful with EXPERIENCE, you have mispelt it three times at least
here.
>
> 4) "Professional Experince" section is a table too. Do you think
> cloumns titles (Year, Postion, company, Area of Work/Type of Work) are
> ok?? do you think I need to rewrite them?? any idea or hint please?
I think that would be OK, very clear in fact, but I'm not an employer
>
> Thanks alot
You're welcome, good luck.
=====================================================================
> MyName
> MyAddress
>
>
> Profile:
> ========
> Computer Engineer with Master Degree in computer engineer and 15 years
Master's degree in computer engineering...
> of industry and teaching experience in Networking, Wireless technology
> and computer Artitutrue and Design.
Artititrue? Kezaco?
>
> Teaching Area of Interest:
> ==========================
> Computer networks , wireless networks and mobile computing,
> fundamentals of computer systems (A+), Operating Systems (Windows,
> Linux/UNIX), MCSA, MCSE, Security+
...areas...
>
> Teaching Experince
> ===================
> Year .............Institute....... Course Taught......
> -------------------------------------------------------------
> May02-May03.......ABC Collge.......Introduction to computer hardware
College (c'est un typo je sais mais je le signale en cas).
>
>
> Profesional Expeice:
> ====================
Experience.
> Year.........Postion.............Company Name...... Area of work
Position
> ----------------------------------------------------------------
> Jan00-02.....Computer Engineer.......ABC........... Networking
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