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Subject: does this sentence make sense?
Date: 31 May 2004 12:50:14 -0700
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Hi
I need feedback from someone whose native language is english. I wrote
a song inspired by The Great Novel "The Great Gatsby". But - the song
begins with a line, that I'm not sure makes (even poetic) sense in
english. It goes like this:
"I piled my charms to the second floor"
Is this interpretable? And if it is, how would you interpret it?
Thanks a lot!
Nimbus
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