| Re: grammar check please |
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| Douglas Sederberg (vornoff@sonic.net) |
2004/02/25 18:00 |
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From: Douglas Sederberg <vornoff@sonic.net>
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Subject: Re: grammar check please
Date: Wed, 25 Feb 2004 17:00:15 -0800
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In article <403d1170$0$11495$3a628fcd@reader2.nntp.hccnet.nl>, Rinze
Smit <rinze.smit@hccnet.nl> wrote:
> hi,
> we need a little text for a cd. Could anyone give me some pointers on
> grammar (and maybe construction) in this piece of text?
Sure.
>
> Many thanks in advance
> Showband Marum, The Netherlands
> Rinze Smit
>
> Showband Marum is an international known band with a special 'sound'. The
...is an internationally known band...
> band received 4 gold medals during the World Music Contests, including two
> 'with distinction' and they also won the Dutch Championships several times.
> The colorfull uniform and the flashing guard makes the band unique in it's
The colorful uniform and the flashing guard make the band unique in its
performance.
> performance. Showband Marum is also world record holder "Longest muical
> march" with 75,2 kilometer.
Marum is also the world record holder for "Longest Musical March"
with...
> This compact disk, is the third one of the band. In 1992 "Russians" appeared
This is the band's third compact disc.
> and in 1997 "My Favorite Things" on which you could also hear some concert
, then in 1997 "My Favorite Things", which also contained several
concert pieces.
> pieces. This cd contains "The West Side Story" show, which was performed in
> 2002 and 2003 and the show "Colours of the world" which is performed in 2004
"Colours of the World" which is now being performed through 2005.
> and 2005. This cd also contains a concert-piece (nrs. 10-14). If you need
> any more information on Showband Marum: please visit our website:
> www.showbandmarum.nl
>
>Hope this helps. One other thing: You might have meant "West Side
Story" instead of "The West Side Story".
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