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Subject: grammar check please
Date: Wed, 25 Feb 2004 22:19:44 +0100
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hi,
we need a little text for a cd. Could anyone give me some pointers on
grammar (and maybe construction) in this piece of text?
Many thanks in advance
Showband Marum, The Netherlands
Rinze Smit
Showband Marum is an international known band with a special 'sound'. The
band received 4 gold medals during the World Music Contests, including two
'with distinction' and they also won the Dutch Championships several times.
The colorfull uniform and the flashing guard makes the band unique in it's
performance. Showband Marum is also world record holder "Longest muical
march" with 75,2 kilometer.
This compact disk, is the third one of the band. In 1992 "Russians" appeared
and in 1997 "My Favorite Things" on which you could also hear some concert
pieces. This cd contains "The West Side Story" show, which was performed in
2002 and 2003 and the show "Colours of the world" which is performed in 2004
and 2005. This cd also contains a concert-piece (nrs. 10-14). If you need
any more information on Showband Marum: please visit our website:
www.showbandmarum.nl
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