alt.fan.smeagolPrev. Next
Re: splish in four part - "Splash.jpg" yEnc (1/1)
bop (boppin@da.hop) 2007/11/01 18:46

Path: news.nzbot.com!not-for-mail
From: bop <boppin@da.hop>
Newsgroups: alt.fan.smeagol
Subject: Re: splish in four part - "Splash.jpg" yEnc (1/1)
Message-ID: <mqski39on14ecpaduebombflcnb7dmn7ld@4ax.com>
References: <0003HW.C3492E4800206936F0488530@news.easynews.com> <vj4ai3h9pm26iv4s4g47g6j0cqh01u4hbo@4ax.com> <0001HW.C34E96FD0000FA7BF0488530@news.easynews.com>
X-Newsreader: Forte Agent 1.91/32.564
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Lines: 33
X-Complaints-To: abuse@usenetserver.com
X-Abuse-Info: Please be sure to forward a copy of ALL headers
X-Abuse-Info: Otherwise we will be unable to process your complaint properly.
NNTP-Posting-Date: Thu, 01 Nov 2007 19:46:19 EST
Date: Fri, 02 Nov 2007 11:46:26 +1100
Xref: news.nzbot.com alt.fan.smeagol:1230

On Thu, 01 Nov 2007 03:33:01 GMT, Ghost <deadly@night.shade> wrote:

>On Oct 30, 2007, bop wrote:
>
>> On Sun, 28 Oct 2007 01:05:03 GMT, Ghost <deadly@night.shade> wrote:
>>
>>
>> Lovely, Ghost. The figure is beautiful and the water droplets are
>> perfect. My only little criticism is the top of the right arm looks
>> slightly distorted.
>> Still loving your work.
>> Jess
>>
>>
>>
>
>Hi Jess,
>
>Your right or his?
>His left arm has a shadow that seems to distort the arm.


His right arm....it seems the underneath near the top should be less
bulgy, or else the bulging part should continue to his back...if that
makes sense? It needs only a very small adjustment.

PS: I prefer your series with men and boys rather than Gilbert...like
the locker-room series and the preasr series. My fantasies tend to
'reality' rather than 'fantasy'. I appreciate the art, but not the
story. (Just thought I'd let you know).

Jess



Follow-ups:12345
Next Prev. Article List         Favorite